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Sistine: Deathbringer of Time

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I am really happy with how this turned out.

I know I said I would draw skyscrapers, but I tried, and they looks like blah. So, CLOUDS.

I really like how the colors and details turned out. Especially the feathers and stuff. Though, the wing anatomy makes no sense.

As you can see, I changed Sistine's design a bit and made it simpler. She doesn't have her light grey feathers anymore, and her goggles are a bit different. She still has one blue eye and one red eye.

Here's what's going on...

Sistine is being transformed into her Deathbringer form, a form which she obtained against her will. A Deathbringer is a bird who well, is a controller of a certain kind of death. Sistine is the Deathbringer of Time, or old age. (Just to let you know, everyone in her world is a bird, many warm blooded creatures have died off, leaving only a few non bird species and many reptiles. Birds were that main group of warm blooded creatures to survive whatever happened. All humans are dead.) There are also other Deathbringer birds. Each Deathbringer has an idem, Sistine's being a silver watch. Sistine's main goal is to rid herself of her silver watch, and destroy her curse.

About Sistine

Name: Sistine
Species: Common Raven
Age: Young Adult
Gender: Female
Personality: Harsh, prefers to be alone, enjoys fun, smart, sarcastic, can be helpful if it benefits her, unforgiving.
Hobbies: Flying, smithing, scavenging for machine parts, mechanics, metal work, star gazing, thinking.
Location: An old broken clock tower from the human time, in what some birds to believe to be the town of London.

-Sistine does not enjoy others, and prefers to be alone, and do her own thing.
-She hates being mocked, but often mocks others.
-Sistine is trying to break her curse of being a Deathbringer.
-Sistine is unforgiving
-She's fantastic at fixing old machinery.
-Sistine loves to collect things

If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

Favs are OK, but Comments will make my day! I appreciate comments way more than faves.
I would love a critique, but please tell the truth and be HARSH

Enjoy!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Mkay, I'm going to go with pros first.
The background itself is very nicely done, and also simple. I think that is what makes it more believable,and the gradient you used makes it look excellent as well.I love how you did not overload it with stars, it seems to have just enough of them, and they look realistic because of their size.the feathers are done nicely, and while they may be just a tad over detailed, they still look nice.The way you have done the details amazing, and i can tell it took a lot of hard work.the anatomy is also well done, but i can spot some flaws.
Ok, now cons.
The chain (before it hits the body,) is very,square.It would be more believable if it were more round. and the placement of the wings. it is very high up on the back of the bird,and on the "elbow joint" it comes down too low.I would recommend also not to outline the "bones" of the wings.The tail feathers are also short compared to the rest of the body. other than that, i can say this was a very nice piece of works, and most likely one of your best! Keep on working on perfecting your skills!